(limerick) Fun With Re-Writes Comments

sepoy: The lowest enlisted rank in the British Indian army and its successors, equivalent to private. One holding this rank.

Great writes but I love the original version, Sounds more authentic. Thanks for the fun

Justice! The way forward. Thanks for sharing.

Very interesting experiment. Though difficult to decide but I think final, i.e.,5th is the best.

And I go with re-write THREE................

The intro will appear once. The two stanzas will then appear each time with changes...very amazing drafting shared on really. Wisely penned.10

Wes Vogler seems to enjoy this kind of re-write! Any way it helps readers to think in what all ways, the same incident can be presented with variety! Good attempt!