Tuesday, April 25, 2017

Limerick- For Fear Of Robbers Comments

Rating: 5.0

He put all his possessions in a pack
Always carried it on his back
Seeing this strange act
Some followed him in his tract
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Valsa George
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Laughter is good for the soul! A simple but significant statement on the paralyzing effects of fear and rabid reality of living in a world with robbers.

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Akhtar Jawad 07 May 2018

Excess of everything is bad, to be too much careful may also bring miniseries. A great Limerick.

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Loke Kok Yee 13 May 2017

Oh! I thought that was fun 'twas fear that made him run Not robbers acting strange Just he that was derange For threats there was but none

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Valsa George 14 May 2017

Inspired by my limerick, you have written an excellent limerick, Loke....! Thank you!

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Queeny Gona 05 May 2017

Ah! Tragedy of life! fears following man, man chased after fearful thoughts!

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Bri Edwards 27 April 2017

well tract could work here. i was wondering about track, but i don't see where he is, so i can't really say for sure what fits better. hmm? i like the rhyming. the story works for me as well. i wish the guy good luck! bri :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 April 2017

Nice presentation on fear of robbers. Humorous one. Thanks...10

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 April 2017

This strange act! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Nosheen Irfan 26 April 2017

A very witty n humorous depiction of an irrational fear of robbers. Thanks for the big laugh Valsa. A10.

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