Tuesday, June 27, 2017

Limerick- Fear Comments

Rating: 5.0

Scared by his own shadow, in the dark
He sat, with his face turned back.
Behind him he heard a hiss
That made him to piss
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Valsa George
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Akhtar Jawad 25 April 2018

Fear plays very funny roles sometimes, enjoyed the fun in the Limerick.

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Kostas Lagos 18 March 2018

Ha ha ha! I can't even write a comment about this! A mouse! A mouse! Ho ho ho!

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M Asim Nehal 01 January 2018

Ha ha ha..... So true, Jo darr gaya woh mar gaya...

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Rajnish Manga 12 July 2017

Wonderful imagery coupled with an equally hilarious graphic gives the reader a full dose of fun and laughter. Thanks a lot.

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Mj Lemon 11 July 2017

Great fun, Valsa! ! And anyone who could fear a shadow in the dark....that person will live in companionship with fear!

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Nosheen Irfan 03 July 2017

Hahaha. Your wonderful sense of humor shines in this write so well. A10

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Amazing Limerick, Valsa! Added to it, a hilarious picture! ha, ha ha

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Bri Edwards 02 July 2017

if i didn't know that scared by his own shadow*** was an idiom, i would surely have said: how can there be a shadow if one is in darkness? *** afraid/scared of your own shadow - definition and synonyms phrase very easily frightened Synonyms and related words Not brave or willing to take risks: cowardly, spineless, feeble... =============================== ok! don't call it an idiom! phrase, if you wish! ! bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 02 July 2017

i'm glad he didn't hear a spit! ! ! thanks for the punctuation! especially in these lines: Scared by his own shadow, in the dark He sat, with his face turned back. ........without the punctuation, it could be read very differently. well, NOT 'very' differently. what have i unleashed by teaching Valsa how to use comedy! ? to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Simone Inez Harriman 02 July 2017

It's funny how when alone in the dark every sound is very audible and it does make one alert. I would be jumping at every sound especially after watching a horror movie alone late at night.

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Richard Wlodarski 29 June 2017

Both the limerick and the graphic are hilarious. I'll be laughing throughout the Canada Day 150 celebrations. I'll need some levity after public presentations of my poem Cheers Canada 150 +. Thank you, Valsa.

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Loke Kok Yee 29 June 2017

Ho! Ho! , Can always depend on you to make the day a little lighter. Thanks Valsa.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 June 2017

Great fun though there is fear. Very often rats create scare in night. Beautiful presentation. Enjoyed with photo provideded. Thanks...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 June 2017

Great fun though there is fear. Very often rats create scare in night.

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