Scared by his own shadow, in the dark
He sat, with his face turned back.
Behind him he heard a hiss
That made him to piss
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Ha ha ha! I can't even write a comment about this! A mouse! A mouse! Ho ho ho!
Wonderful imagery coupled with an equally hilarious graphic gives the reader a full dose of fun and laughter. Thanks a lot.
Great fun, Valsa! ! And anyone who could fear a shadow in the dark....that person will live in companionship with fear!
Hahaha. Your wonderful sense of humor shines in this write so well. A10
Amazing Limerick, Valsa! Added to it, a hilarious picture! ha, ha ha
if i didn't know that scared by his own shadow*** was an idiom, i would surely have said: how can there be a shadow if one is in darkness? *** afraid/scared of your own shadow - definition and synonyms phrase very easily frightened Synonyms and related words Not brave or willing to take risks: cowardly, spineless, feeble... =============================== ok! don't call it an idiom! phrase, if you wish! ! bri ;)
i'm glad he didn't hear a spit! ! ! thanks for the punctuation! especially in these lines: Scared by his own shadow, in the dark He sat, with his face turned back. ........without the punctuation, it could be read very differently. well, NOT 'very' differently. what have i unleashed by teaching Valsa how to use comedy! ? to MyPoemList. bri :)
It's funny how when alone in the dark every sound is very audible and it does make one alert. I would be jumping at every sound especially after watching a horror movie alone late at night.
Both the limerick and the graphic are hilarious. I'll be laughing throughout the Canada Day 150 celebrations. I'll need some levity after public presentations of my poem Cheers Canada 150 +. Thank you, Valsa.
Ho! Ho! , Can always depend on you to make the day a little lighter. Thanks Valsa.
Great fun though there is fear. Very often rats create scare in night. Beautiful presentation. Enjoyed with photo provideded. Thanks...10
Great fun though there is fear. Very often rats create scare in night.
Fear plays very funny roles sometimes, enjoyed the fun in the Limerick.