Saturday, October 19, 2024

Limerick - Elephant And His Pant. Comments

Rating: 4.8

An elephant donned pants so bright,
he danced with delight, oh what a sight!
but with each mighty twirl,
the fabric did swirl,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Bri Edwards 30 October 2024

Yes! (thank you, Google) But the dancing elephants seem to be wearing ONLY slippers (ballet slippers, which reminds me of Geeta Menon) . : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 30 October 2024

The image which comes to my mind is an elephant is a Walt Disney cartoon, maybe in the lengthy animated Fantasia? ? ?

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Bri Edwards 30 October 2024

I like the poem. *** but I think of LOOSE clothing swirling, not tight clothing. And loose clothing would tend to be LESS likely to tear than tight clothing.

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Rebecca Navarre 30 October 2024

Brilliant imagery! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++

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Bri Edwards 30 October 2024

Asim, I've rarely heard 'pant' used for pants. To me 'pant' is a verb, something a dog may do. I HAVE heard of 'pant leg' to refer to the left or right pant leg of a pair of pants. It's confusing at times I guess. ;)

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Rebecca Navarre 30 October 2024

Awesome! .. : ) This brings giggles and smiles! ..

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 20 October 2024

Lol Thank you for putting a smile on my face

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 20 October 2024

Thank you for sharing a humorous limerick. Full marks for this joyful poem.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 20 October 2024

What a delightful Limerick! The elephant dancing with pants, might and twirl......

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 October 2024

A well crafted limerick with great humor. Very entertaining!

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Darren Jkoeryo 19 October 2024

Very Funny, Elephants without pant looks good.

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Sandra Feldman 19 October 2024

Enjoyed this poem's style and humor, all the way! Full marks.

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Sandra Feldman 19 October 2024

What a comic delight1 An elephant dancing, with such might and gusto, that the fabric was not able to hold up, must have been quite a sight! Best laugh, today! Enjoyed this poem p

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Pallab Chaudhury 19 October 2024

A beautiful imagery... Nice one! Well done my dear.....

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A Limerick that sets as a good example. Hilarious, for sure. Top score

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