Tuesday, September 8, 2020

Limerick- Delirium Comments

Rating: 4.9

In his sleep, he saw a wicked ghoul
Its sharp claws were as that of an owl
He ran out of his bed
Was senseless due to dread
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Valsa George
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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 November 2020

A well crafted limerick piece. Truly humorous....5 stars *****

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Susan Williams 04 October 2020

As you know, I have not liked limericks until I read one of yours and had my funny bone tickled! ! ! This is the 4th limerick of yours that I have read and each of them are so different in topic but like each other in humor. Fantastic construction and topic! ! ! Top marks!

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Bri Edwards 28 September 2020

Who said you could use my grandma's photo? At first i thought the husband was naked, then i thought maybe the wife or the ghoul. Which one? All three? ghoul/owl: (not a great rhyme; what to do?) ghoul pronounced /ɡo͞ol/ vs owl pronounced /oul/ Maybe use " Its claws were sharp, as is the ghoul rule" But i liked the poem anyway. The heck with a limerick rhyme scheme; just call it a poem! bri :)

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Anjandev Roy 12 September 2020

Fine Limerick.....enjoyed it.....thank u......anjandev roy.

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Dreadful dream of " The Limerick Queen" The pun as usual makes it very humous...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 September 2020

He didn't know his nakedness due to dread......wife cried out...foul. much interesting. Well executed. Nice Limerick.

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Kevin Patrick 09 September 2020

A grim and unsettling nightmare, I don't know if I would like to see the creature manifest from this dream! . Terror of your mind created this gothic delight.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 September 2020

What a wonderful limerick and great imagination ! A creation with wit and humor as always. Very entertaining.

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Mahtab Bangalee 09 September 2020

Foul the undress somnambulist Before wife's eyes no shame at least Love in together Both feel divine fair Let it be though in frenzy beast

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Kostas Lagos 09 September 2020

That was very funny and amusing!

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Khairul Ahsan 09 September 2020

Ha ha ha, what a delirium! Structurally, a perfect limerick!

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