An eighty year old was sent to a jail
The old man was denied even a bail
Kissed a girl in public
He injured her tender lip
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Eighty years old! oh! still hungry to kiss! ! ! Iustful character takes birth not to change itself! ! !
I am in my later sixties. Hope, never to be a culprit like him. A kiss is an expression of tender feelings, may be passionate too, but it is never a thing to be forced upon. Loved the humor hidden throughout the lines.
A common complaint against old men turned to be an interesting limerick here....lovely 10
you are wonderful //a poetess miss// and an inspiration for a simplistic poet this..//// PPME what knows he HAHAHA LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
Glad that you are back with that old funny limericks. which you always finish perfectly within the stipulations. I had tried to come out breaking those barriers but later left. CULPRIT is very interesting not the crime.
An interesting limerick: of a kind I have never come across before. Is this supposed to be a pasquinade of some sort?
Wonderful Limerick, as usual.....thank u, dear poetess.....anjandev roy.
It is strange that no comments show up under this poem of mine...... though many have posted comments a day or two before! Poem hunter is becoming very strange for me these days. I cannot comment on many of others' poems too....
As an offence of a large was done by an old man of eighty years old he was sent to Jail and got no bail. This Limerick poem is amazing but this gives unlimited fun. The old might have expressed his affection towards his little granddaughter. This poem is excellently penned...10
when one is old wants to kiss but is sans all what to do may be dentures protrude but kiss would do tender girl she loves her younger one and is morer friendly a She should have slapped him let him now stay in jail else many more kids he will derail pedophile eh
I have tried and tried to write a limerick that had 10 syllables each in lines one, two and five and 7 each in lines three and four.- -my efforts have yet to result in anything understandable! You, dear Valsa, are a master of the form as well as other kinds of poems! ! ! And that old geezer was indeed a public menace! ! 10+ as usual
What a fascinating limerick. So cleverly written. The curse of a stolen Kiss! I hope the old man will not stay in prison for life for a kiss and minor injury... Very entertaining write, Valsa . Loved reading it. Glad to know you are back, Valsa. Best wishes for your son's wedding. To my treasure chest.
Hopefully, I have already read this amazing Limerick! I find all your limericks not only humorous but also technically perfect. Many people think that it's easy to pen Limerick but I find it difficult because I myself have tried many times but failed. You are really a wizard in this field. To MyPoemList
A wonderful limerick dear madam....enjoyed the romantic humor.....10+++++++
offence on a large scale