Limerick - Culprit Poem by Valsa George

Limerick - Culprit

Rating: 5.0


An eighty year old was sent to a jail
The old man was denied even a bail
Kissed a girl in public
He injured her tender lip
Was seen as an offence of a large scale

Limerick - Culprit
Wednesday, July 22, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: kiss,limerick
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
10 syllables each in lines one, two and five and 7 each in lines three and four.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Glad that you are back with that old funny limericks. which you always finish perfectly within the stipulations. I had tried to come out breaking those barriers but later left. CULPRIT is very interesting not the crime.

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Vaibhav Simha 24 July 2020

An interesting limerick: of a kind I have never come across before. Is this supposed to be a pasquinade of some sort?

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Anjandev Roy 23 July 2020

Wonderful Limerick, as usual.....thank u, dear poetess.....anjandev roy.

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Valsa George 23 July 2020

It is strange that no comments show up under this poem of mine...... though many have posted comments a day or two before! Poem hunter is becoming very strange for me these days. I cannot comment on many of others' poems too....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 July 2020

As an offence of a large was done by an old man of eighty years old he was sent to Jail and got no bail. This Limerick poem is amazing but this gives unlimited fun. The old might have expressed his affection towards his little granddaughter. This poem is excellently penned...10

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Suresh Kumar Ek 01 September 2020

offence on a large scale

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 August 2020

Eighty years old! oh! still hungry to kiss! ! ! Iustful character takes birth not to change itself! ! !

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Khairul Ahsan 02 August 2020

I am in my later sixties. Hope, never to be a culprit like him. A kiss is an expression of tender feelings, may be passionate too, but it is never a thing to be forced upon. Loved the humor hidden throughout the lines.

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Indira Renganathan 01 August 2020

A common complaint against old men turned to be an interesting limerick here....lovely 10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 July 2020

you are wonderful //a poetess miss// and an inspiration for a simplistic poet this..//// PPME what knows he HAHAHA LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

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