An eighty year old was sent to a jail
The old man was denied even a bail
Kissed a girl in public
He injured her tender lip
Was seen as an offence of a large scale
An interesting limerick: of a kind I have never come across before. Is this supposed to be a pasquinade of some sort?
Wonderful Limerick, as usual.....thank u, dear poetess.....anjandev roy.
It is strange that no comments show up under this poem of mine...... though many have posted comments a day or two before! Poem hunter is becoming very strange for me these days. I cannot comment on many of others' poems too....
As an offence of a large was done by an old man of eighty years old he was sent to Jail and got no bail. This Limerick poem is amazing but this gives unlimited fun. The old might have expressed his affection towards his little granddaughter. This poem is excellently penned...10
Eighty years old! oh! still hungry to kiss! ! ! Iustful character takes birth not to change itself! ! !
I am in my later sixties. Hope, never to be a culprit like him. A kiss is an expression of tender feelings, may be passionate too, but it is never a thing to be forced upon. Loved the humor hidden throughout the lines.
A common complaint against old men turned to be an interesting limerick here....lovely 10
you are wonderful //a poetess miss// and an inspiration for a simplistic poet this..//// PPME what knows he HAHAHA LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Glad that you are back with that old funny limericks. which you always finish perfectly within the stipulations. I had tried to come out breaking those barriers but later left. CULPRIT is very interesting not the crime.