Sunday, August 2, 2020

Limerick- Cat Is Out Of The Bag Comments

Rating: 5.0

The old man was in home quarantine
He enjoyed seeing films so obscene
He did this in secret
With all the windows shut
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Valsa George
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Bri Edwards 15 September 2020

I was enjoying till i got to line 5, with which i have " problems" . AND today i've noticed some weird happenings on poem pages of several members. The way poems are listed has changed and sometimes i've not found a way to send a poem to MyPoemList aka 'my favorite poems'. i sent a complaint to PH and then things seemed to return to 'normal', but then back again to 'abnormal'. well, this is a minor problem compared to others in this world. :) bri :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 September 2020

He did this in secret With all the windows shut Felt sheepish, as this, his son had seen Facts of life.... revealed. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 August 2020

Wonderful imagery and imaginary. Most amusing. I appreciate it. Thanks for sharing.10

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What a striking limerick! . We know a lot of old people who steal pleasure watching such films. The sheepishness when become known to anybody else is imaginable.....10+

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Anjandev Roy 07 August 2020

Great Limerick, as usual....thank u.....anjandev roy.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 August 2020

Amazingly humorous write is always a welcome respite from a world full of uncertainty like this wonderful limerick. Very entertaining and so cleverly written from the Queen of Limericks.

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M Asim Nehal 03 August 2020

Ha ha ha fantastic limerick. Indeed cat is out of the bag.10+

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Soran M. H 03 August 2020

Hello Dear poet Valsa I have noticed that the title of this five-lines humorous poem strongly referring to the last line and completing it, this masterpiece only can be written by a professional poet such as Valsa George..10+ and goes onto my fav list. well done and thanks for sharing

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Soran M. H 03 August 2020

Cat Is Out Of The Bag Felt sheepish, as this, his son had seen

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 August 2020

in that old mind sluggish time fishy obscene got life rhyme little son became don Home alone hide and seek lime!

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Indira Renganathan 02 August 2020

Again a real life incident in a lovely Limerick form....both humour and satire I feel there....10

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