Monday, November 2, 2015

Limerick – Carrying Burden Comments

Rating: 5.0

For how long shall I carry this burden?
Please help me to remove it sudden
Else it will grow bigger than pride
I won’t be able to become anybody’s bride
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M. Asim Nehal
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Valsa George 03 November 2015

Seeing the kangaroos, this thought always strikes me! I wonder, in the pouch of the kangaroo here, is it some other intruder sitting? Interesting!

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T Rajan Evol 02 November 2015

Ha ha ha..A burden to carry on like we do in life.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 November 2015

Wright has created wonderful creatures, you have created wonderful poem. Thank you Asim...10

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Loke Kok Yee 02 November 2015

ha! ha1 ha! now that's a real serious problem 10+++

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Ari Alsio 02 November 2015

Please help, my pleasure. Thanks Man

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Mohammad Skati 02 November 2015

Burdens might be a lot of things in life. I loved it.

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Shakil Ahmed 02 November 2015

asim, the poem is superb well-wright, i enjoyed reading the poem,

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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