Saturday, March 16, 2019

Limerick - By Mistake Comments

Rating: 4.8

My wife told me to get her a lip gloss
By mistake I gave her a tube of glue
Now she keeps a severe grudge
She never lets her lips budge
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Valsa George
COMMENTS
Suresh Kumar Ek 01 September 2020

make the lips glued! ! ! !

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Soran M. H 16 August 2020

this is a fantastic humour.... this lovely Limerick is very well rhymed, here the make ups and foolishness has been addressed very poetically, excellent piece of work it deserves 10 for definite

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Soran M. H 16 August 2020

, thanks for sharing with us, I hope you stay on the top 500 poets all the time

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Soran M. H 16 August 2020

By mistake I gave her a tube of glue Now she keeps a severe grudge She never lets her lips budge

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 November 2019

This is the original limerick, a limerick and nothing but limerick, good laughter and relevant is the deal, and with a picture that goes with it, and here ii is

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Kevin Patrick 08 June 2019

LOL, this is how you do a limerick! , style and wit and a boat of humor. Inspirational Wit! 10!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 March 2019

An amazing limerick dear madam! My great pleasure reading it again and again......To MyPoemList

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Savita Tyagi 27 March 2019

Hahaha! Another fantastic limerick from our Limerick Queen! Thank you for sharing!

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Valsa George 28 March 2019

Thank you Savita for the title offered to me.....! Do you feel that I can own it until someone rightfully claims it?

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 March 2019

This is a very brilliant Limerick that gives fun and we cannot stop it visiting again and smiling large. You have brilliant power of expression.

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Valsa George 24 March 2019

Thanks a lot Kumaramani sir for visiting this page time and again! I am so happy my limerick really entertained you!

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 March 2019

oh ho ho super glue on the lips flow to kiss, there is no clue!

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Valsa George 21 March 2019

Ha... ha! With the super glue on the lips, better not to kiss! If so, both of them will have to go to a surgeon! Thank you Mahtab for your humorous response!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 March 2019

FANTASTIC ! A witty and very entertaining limerick. Very well executed write.10++++

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Valsa George 19 March 2019

Thanks a lot Rose Marie! So happy for your appreciation and high rating!

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Mj Lemon 18 March 2019

Indeed...a mistake! I'll be laughing the rest of the day. This is one of your best, Valsa.

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Valsa George 19 March 2019

Thank you Lemon! So glad I could give the chance for a good laugh! I think that's the purpose of a limerick!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 March 2019

There is no reason but helplessness is amazingly expressed. There is no clue but tube of glue does magic here. Revisiting this funny Limerick I am very glad.

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Valsa George 19 March 2019

Thanks a lot Kumaramani sir for revisiting my limerick! Indeed she is placed in a helpless situation!

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Susan Williams 17 March 2019

hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha- - my word, I sure enjoy YOUR limericks and as you know limericks have never been my fav read until I started reading yours! ! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Valsa George 19 March 2019

Thanks a lot Susan! Limericks are rather easy to write! Susan you can also try! However I am happy to find an admirer of limericks! So glad you enjoyed it!

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sekharan Pookkat 16 March 2019

those who depend others for too simple things will definitely lost their whims and fancies.

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Valsa George 17 March 2019

Quite right Sekharan....! Those who depend too much on others will have to face such consequences. Instead of asking the husband to get the lip gloss, she could have bought it herself! Thanks for your observation!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 March 2019

Very interesting composition. Beautiful Limerick with full of fun. Enjoyed with thanks.10

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Valsa George 17 March 2019

Thank you Kumaramani sir! Occasionally there should be something to laugh over!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 March 2019

Ha..ha...ha! Your photo selection is absolutely wonderful! An amazing Limerick dear madam! Enjoyed the fun....1000000000++++

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Valsa George 17 March 2019

Glad you enjoyed it! It is something quite probable when both husband and wife become clumsy! Thanks Dillip for the comment and high rating!

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Indira Renganathan 16 March 2019

'Emma wanted to make some halwa Mamma gave some tips to make halwa Emma made it rightly Yet something went wrongly Lo, Mamma's mouth got stuck with halwa'....this is my limerick written some time back...it is glue in yours...sometimes we think alike...well done Valsa 10

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Valsa George 17 March 2019

Wow.... great limerick! Thanks a lot Indira ji for sharing it! Also for your beautiful comment!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 March 2019

A fabulous limerick, Maa'am Valsa.....10+++++++++++

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Valsa George 16 March 2019

Thank you so much Bernard...... for your comment and high rating!

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 16 March 2019

for tat, I guess. Anway, he deserves it. Lovely Limerick. Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 16 March 2019

It's not for tat....! When her lips were glued, how could she talk? The foolish husband thought that she was keeping a grudge for his act! Thank you sir!

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