As he went for a long country stroll
he discerned losing his heart and soul
to a lovely lass,
cutting fodder grass
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I like the gentle humor in so many of your limericks- - and this one has an added touch of romance! ! ! 10+++
Well written Limerick. Humour as it is plus bit romance! 10+
Attraction has great motivational power. The way you have presented this poem is heart winning. Visiting this gain I am very happy. This is of course a nice fun giving Limerick.
Awesome and interesting. The picture that comes to mind after reading the makes it more enjoyable. Thanks Valsa ji.
The natural human instinct precisely captured in this well-composed limerick! A similarity can be seen in birds as well: it is a spectacle of courtship!
Its just like an Indian story.... and at last he marries the lass. Thank you Valsa George. You have wonderfully created a cinema in just a limerick
What happened next...? a natural happening in a nice interesting limerick form..and of course that lass is beautiful.. thank you Valsa for this cute limerick
Lovely lass who is cutting fodder grass is understanding his coax. Nicely penned. Beautiful Limerick dear madam. Thanks for sharing with beautiful graphic.
And then... we all are eager to know what happened. That lovely lass apart, your limerick is no less attractive.
A brilliant Limerick dear madam! Thanks for sharing....10++++++
Fantastic Limerick. Wonderful to read. Thank u, dear poetess.anjandev roy.
I love your limericks. This one, with an appopriate gaphic added, tells an absorbing short story that leaves the readers asking themselves at the end- 'what happened next'?