Thursday, November 28, 2019

Limerick- Attraction Comments

Rating: 4.9

As he went for a long country stroll
he discerned losing his heart and soul
to a lovely lass,
cutting fodder grass
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Valsa George
COMMENTS
Khairul Ahsan 07 May 2020

I love your limericks. This one, with an appopriate gaphic added, tells an absorbing short story that leaves the readers asking themselves at the end- 'what happened next'?

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Susan Williams 18 March 2020

I like the gentle humor in so many of your limericks- - and this one has an added touch of romance! ! ! 10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 08 February 2020

Well written Limerick. Humour as it is plus bit romance! 10+

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 December 2019

Attraction has great motivational power. The way you have presented this poem is heart winning. Visiting this gain I am very happy. This is of course a nice fun giving Limerick.

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Rajnish Manga 13 December 2019

Awesome and interesting. The picture that comes to mind after reading the makes it more enjoyable. Thanks Valsa ji.

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Mihaela Pirjol 12 December 2019

The natural human instinct precisely captured in this well-composed limerick! A similarity can be seen in birds as well: it is a spectacle of courtship!

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Its just like an Indian story.... and at last he marries the lass. Thank you Valsa George. You have wonderfully created a cinema in just a limerick

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 December 2019

and any one would if one could lovely lass ma'am

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Indira Renganathan 05 December 2019

What happened next...? a natural happening in a nice interesting limerick form..and of course that lass is beautiful.. thank you Valsa for this cute limerick

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2019

Lovely lass who is cutting fodder grass is understanding his coax. Nicely penned. Beautiful Limerick dear madam. Thanks for sharing with beautiful graphic.

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 November 2019

And then... we all are eager to know what happened. That lovely lass apart, your limerick is no less attractive.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 November 2019

A brilliant Limerick dear madam! Thanks for sharing....10++++++

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Anjandev Roy 28 November 2019

Fantastic Limerick. Wonderful to read. Thank u, dear poetess.anjandev roy.

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Kostas Lagos 28 November 2019

Wonderful limerick! To my list

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