"Days back my son swallowed my car's key"
Said the father to duty doctor, Abbey
"Why didn't you bring him before? "
Asked doctor a little sore
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Best dad in limerick to be thanked for always keeping duplicate key in hand. loved it.
(cont.) .....another to MyPoemList, MY student-of-humour. well done! ! bri ;)
v-child, your last line brought from me prolonged laughter; ok, two seconds worth, ........which is more than i can say for 98% of the poems on PH....that i've read. but, i at first thought line 2 was a continuation of line one i.e. part of the same sentence, ........AND i lost valuable time straightening things out in my (slow-to-understand?) mind. the duty doctor 's name 'is' Abbey? i think i heard of an English road with that name; i could be wrong. Wrong! ! (continued) ...
hahahahahahahahahah- -Oh my goodness, Valsa, you have gotten me to loving limericks- -your limericks, that is. Other people's limericks have to prove themselves but not yours- -I know I'm going to have a cheery moment while reading the results of your mind at play! ! ! ! ! And so far I have not guessed the ending beforehand which means your limericks are fresh and original! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
I am bowled over by your beautiful comment, Susan! So sorry for the late response..............! . I have been driven hither and thither by the currents of life..... Didn't have any time to read or comment on the poems of my friends here, missing out much! Susan, glad you enjoy my limericks and thank you for the high rating
Really, really funny. When I stopped laughing, I had to say to myself, Hope this isn't based on a true story. You elevate the art of the Limerick, Valsa.
Thank you so much Lemon! Happy to see one who has really enjoyed the fun of this limerick!
A lover was driving a car with one of his arms around her beloved. The traffic sergeant stopped him and said, Can't you use your both hands? . The lover replied, What do you mean? I have to keep a hand on the steering!
Ha....Ha....Ha.... What a scene! Thumbs Up for the humour. Thanks, Valsa ji.
The callous father was using duplicate key so he thought of there is no urgency of calling on a doctor! Let the key be comfortably settled in my son’s stomach! A wonderful Limerick! Enjoyed the humor! Full marks************
Really it is an interesting Limerick with full of fun. I enjoyed it with thanks. A 10