Thursday, May 17, 2018

Limerick- At The Hospital Comments

Rating: 4.9

"Days back my son swallowed my car's key"
Said the father to duty doctor, Abbey
"Why didn't you bring him before? "
Asked doctor a little sore
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Valsa George
COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 16 April 2019

Really it is an interesting Limerick with full of fun. I enjoyed it with thanks. A 10

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Geetha Jayakumar 18 June 2018

Best dad in limerick to be thanked for always keeping duplicate key in hand. loved it.

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Bri Edwards 12 June 2018

(cont.) .....another to MyPoemList, MY student-of-humour. well done! ! bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 12 June 2018

v-child, your last line brought from me prolonged laughter; ok, two seconds worth, ........which is more than i can say for 98% of the poems on PH....that i've read. but, i at first thought line 2 was a continuation of line one i.e. part of the same sentence, ........AND i lost valuable time straightening things out in my (slow-to-understand?) mind. the duty doctor 's name 'is' Abbey? i think i heard of an English road with that name; i could be wrong. Wrong! ! (continued) ...

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Susan Williams 26 May 2018

hahahahahahahahahah- -Oh my goodness, Valsa, you have gotten me to loving limericks- -your limericks, that is. Other people's limericks have to prove themselves but not yours- -I know I'm going to have a cheery moment while reading the results of your mind at play! ! ! ! ! And so far I have not guessed the ending beforehand which means your limericks are fresh and original! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Valsa George 29 May 2018

I am bowled over by your beautiful comment, Susan! So sorry for the late response..............! . I have been driven hither and thither by the currents of life..... Didn't have any time to read or comment on the poems of my friends here, missing out much! Susan, glad you enjoy my limericks and thank you for the high rating

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Mj Lemon 20 May 2018

Really, really funny. When I stopped laughing, I had to say to myself, Hope this isn't based on a true story. You elevate the art of the Limerick, Valsa.

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Valsa George 21 May 2018

Thank you so much Lemon! Happy to see one who has really enjoyed the fun of this limerick!

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Khairul Ahsan 20 May 2018

Loved the humor. A perfect limerick!

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Savita Tyagi 19 May 2018

So much fun to read your limerick! 10 for this one. Thanks.

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Glen Kappy 19 May 2018

This made me smile, Valsa. Thanks! -Glen

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Akhtar Jawad 18 May 2018

A lover was driving a car with one of his arms around her beloved. The traffic sergeant stopped him and said, Can't you use your both hands? . The lover replied, What do you mean? I have to keep a hand on the steering!

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Khairul Ahsan 20 May 2018

Ha ha ha! :)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 May 2018

I appreciate the comment of esteemed poet Kelly Kurt!

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Kostas Lagos 17 May 2018

Hilarious! A duplicate key! !

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Kelly Kurt 17 May 2018

It's a good thing that the son didn't swallow the car. : -)

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Rajnish Manga 17 May 2018

Ha....Ha....Ha.... What a scene! Thumbs Up for the humour. Thanks, Valsa ji.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 May 2018

The callous father was using duplicate key so he thought of there is no urgency of calling on a doctor! Let the key be comfortably settled in my son’s stomach! A wonderful Limerick! Enjoyed the humor! Full marks************

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