Wednesday, September 23, 2020

Limerick- After The Booze Comments

Rating: 4.9

He went home gaily after a few pegs
Fell onto his bed dangling his soiled legs
Blissfully fell asleep soon
His wife came calling him 'loon'
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Valsa George
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Mahtab Bangalee 08 November 2020

Falling from bed, he could feel her hard kicks/// hard kicks of his wife are the soft petals of rose flower for the boozing mind// well limerick

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M Asim Nehal 27 September 2020

Haha ha this is what happens when mind looses control. Everything goes out of control. Very funny he will wonder the next morning how come few pegs got him to black and blue.10 Stars....

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Anjandev Roy 27 September 2020

This is an excellent Limerick.............thank u.....anjandev roy.

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Mj Lemon 25 September 2020

Valsa, this is the finest type of verse. I read this, and I can appreciate either the comedy or the tragedy of the situation. Amazing!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 September 2020

This is what usually happens when a man consumed too much alcohol! I hope he did not hurt his head! ! ! A very entertaining limerick with an appropriate graphic. Beautifully crafted and presented.

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Again a funny limerick from a mind always set on humour. Deserves a high appreciation and top gradung

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Varsha M 23 September 2020

Real booze. Now atleast they should be able to see it. Good one ma'am

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Aarzoo Mehek 23 September 2020

Hahahaha just loved the humour in this limerick. Very very cute poem.5*

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 September 2020

hA..HA HA ha..ha..ha..I could not stop myself smiling large. He felt asleep soon and later felt the kick given by wife. Then he will leave taking pack of drink next time! An amazing poem is shared...full 5 stars!

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Rajnish Manga 23 September 2020

Awesomely funny and fantastic. Evokes laughter. One more in the tippler series. Thanks, Valsa ji.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 September 2020

Sheerly amazing little poem dear madam! Enjoyed the humor...Top star

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Khairul Ahsan 23 September 2020

Ha ha ha, right treatment to set him right!

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