He went home gaily after a few pegs
Fell onto his bed dangling his soiled legs
Blissfully fell asleep soon
His wife came calling him 'loon'
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Haha ha this is what happens when mind looses control. Everything goes out of control. Very funny he will wonder the next morning how come few pegs got him to black and blue.10 Stars....
This is an excellent Limerick.............thank u.....anjandev roy.
Valsa, this is the finest type of verse. I read this, and I can appreciate either the comedy or the tragedy of the situation. Amazing!
This is what usually happens when a man consumed too much alcohol! I hope he did not hurt his head! ! ! A very entertaining limerick with an appropriate graphic. Beautifully crafted and presented.
Again a funny limerick from a mind always set on humour. Deserves a high appreciation and top gradung
Real booze. Now atleast they should be able to see it. Good one ma'am
Hahahaha just loved the humour in this limerick. Very very cute poem.5*
hA..HA HA ha..ha..ha..I could not stop myself smiling large. He felt asleep soon and later felt the kick given by wife. Then he will leave taking pack of drink next time! An amazing poem is shared...full 5 stars!
Awesomely funny and fantastic. Evokes laughter. One more in the tippler series. Thanks, Valsa ji.
Sheerly amazing little poem dear madam! Enjoyed the humor...Top star
Falling from bed, he could feel her hard kicks/// hard kicks of his wife are the soft petals of rose flower for the boozing mind// well limerick