Thursday, April 11, 2019

Limerick- A Reply To Bri's Comment Comments

Rating: 4.9

"Shouldn't we observe our jubilee", asked Bri
"Shall we go out and have a turkey fry"?
In words as sharp as a knife,
Replied his angry wife.
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Valsa George
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Khairul Ahsan 13 September 2020

Ha ha ha, loved Mrs. Bri's reaction in the poem and Mr. Bri's appreciation of the poem in the comments!

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Bri Edwards 29 June 2019

oh, i guess i already sent it to MyPoemList. :))))))))))))

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Valsa George 01 July 2019

Hi Bri Thank you again and again.......! !

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Bri Edwards 29 June 2019

your poem to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Susan Williams 08 June 2019

Enjoyed this immensely! ! ! Thank you for giving me a giggle today! ! ! ! Smoothly done!

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Mj Lemon 28 May 2019

I don't know how I missed this one earlier....a great laugh is always the ideal way to start a perfect day. Most excellent, Valsa!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 30 April 2019

Ha ha ha! That's a real good one, Valsa! A for tat! A fabulous Limerick! A photo so apt! .....10

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Savita Tyagi 21 April 2019

Hahaha! Good one Valsa!

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A well balanced but befitting reply to Bri

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Valsa George 21 April 2019

Thank you dear friend.....!

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Bri Edwards 15 April 2019

if that's my wife in above photo, i'd grab her finger, twist it good, put it and others in her mouth, and spank her as a husband should! I guess i've taught Valsa all i know, about limericks and how to be funny, and now, in her limericks it does show: she's a star to admire, with many fans in tow. to MyPoemList bri :)

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Valsa George 17 April 2019

To Bri A husband's duty is not to spank Some do it when they're drunk Or when their head is blank They belong to an inferior rank! Fascinated by your humour and wit I badly longed for that gift I thought limericks would click Now they give me a real kick Of course you were my master Now limerick has become my anchor

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Bri Edwards 29 June 2019

dear Valsa, i've stumbled on this today while in N. Carolina library. how nice. i mean what you wrote above and below. however, things must be confused in India! ! ! ! of course a husband's job IS to spank his wife, whether she's been good or bad! ! ! and sometimes, if i see a husband here NOT spanking his wife, i do it for him! yes, i'm a helpful guy. bri :)

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 April 2019

A very clever and properly executed limerick. Great rhyming throughout this humorous and entertaining write. The many intricacies of married life is so well depicted in this poem and the picture that goes with it.10+++++

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Indira Renganathan 13 April 2019

A wedding celebration gives us happiness only in the beginning years after the wedding...later on all controversies and misunderstanding somehow arise and it is not happy as much as earlier...very often we argue and quarrel loudly...your limerick says it correctly in the limerick way....very amusing....10 ++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 April 2019

Sometimes Bri gives amazing comments. Giving reply to a comment is too interesting. Composing a Limerick gives fun to composer as well as the readers. We shall remain here but we should not cry! Instead of crying many will try and try to get success. What an amazing and fun giving poem this is really! ...10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 April 2019

Kumarmani Ji has rightly pointed out.. 'We shall remain here and cry', My friend Bernard enjoys the fun but I would like to see how Bri takes this....a wonderful Limerick....I enjoyed it a lot!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 April 2019

I absolutely agree with esteemed poet Kumarmani ji...Thanks for sharing.....10++++++++++++++++++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 April 2019

A fun limerick, dear Ma'am Valsa....10+++++++++

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