Monday, December 10, 2018

Limerick-A Child's Play Comments

Rating: 5.0

"Ma, look at God's lower lip"said child
"That's the crescent moon dear" mom told child
Next day rainbow was up
Mom said "God's upper lip"
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Indira Renganathan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 December 2018

Unlimited fun we get reading such an interesting poem. You have beautifully penned this. A nice re-visit motivates mind. An interesting poem wisely penned.10

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 December 2018

wow beautifully compose the last line and whole limerick

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Valsa George 11 December 2018

Indeed a clever child and the observation she/ he has made is quite imaginative, also logical! A 10 for this hilarious write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2018

So humorous poem with nice imaginary is amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.10

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