Limerick- A Bubble Burst Within Comments

A poem of pure passion! The title and the picture is so apt to the text! It occurs to my mind that may be, you have sacrificed some more appropritae words at places for the sake of accuracy of syllables that are preconditions of a limerick.

Oh. my this is sooooooooooooooooooooo sweet and you handled your topic with such delicate lines. excellent excellent excellent! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10++++++++++++

Splendid piece. Thank u. anjandev roy.

Valsa, you’ve captured in this the spark, the magnetic charge, of infatuation that hopefully leads to something deeper and more permanent. -Glen

Valsa, dear Poetess, this is a classic Limerick! The accuracy of the syllables, the perfect rhythm of the verse and above all, the content of the poem. A passionate bubble, indeed, bursting from within. A picture so attractive and apt.......10

to MyPoemList. and i love the title, text, and.................her chest! his eyes will soon be heading South, and perhaps hers will as well. line 7: good, very, but i'd reverse the order of " she has" to " has she" . bri :)

Lovely, you have taken a limerick to another level. And what an apt picture!

The exact, precise moment of attraction....You capture it perfectly, Valsa!

Yes, when eyes meet and match love blooms..indeed a lovely amusing limerick..thank you Valsa

Like rippling waves in a pond the communication was made very brilliantly with electric bond and eyes explored the beauty of perception of love and mutual understanding. You have trick-fully and beautifully presented this excellent Limerick poem....10

That's a good one, Valsa - -10. Nice picture too. I just posted one myself.

A mutual attraction has a reaction.