Limerick -A Bird Comments

Your bird Limerick is magnificent. You have wonderfully observed the bird. I could not stop myself smiling very large. This is an excellent Limerick! ...10

It can stay near creek Enough food for a week It must come to terms with local birds else harmful Bird, living, conditions. all came in into this poem a fine poem. tony

Birds flying there Birds flying here slow wings no sing Falling with drear

A well crafted poem. Simply wonderful....10++