To the husband asked his crazy wife
'Have you slept with other women in life'?
He said- 'Only with you dear
With others, awake...! Why fear'?
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today this goes into August's showcase! bri ;) it should show up later today or tomorrow. thanks.
Thank you Bri for putting this silly poem of mine in your prestigious showcase......!
The poor girl is in need of English lessons! Ha! Ha! Ha! Thanks Valsa.
I think this is brilliant, Valsa. You address with such fantastic humour an issue that that can be tragic, or at the very least laced with sadness and discomfort. I am amazed at how readily appeased so many people are by mere technicalities. Where would we humans be without the technicalities that allow us to face the turmoil of life?
Its funny to me the husband said with others awake! So in reality he has slept with other women but he doesn't want her to get mad lol. She herself had to know what the answer was already, she just wanted to be comforted. But hey if that's what saves their relationship to each his/her own. This was an interesting little piece, well written.~
At least the man was honest- -I don't know why the woman asked if she was just going to turn a blind eye.... or maybe she really was just asking a literal question... Valsa, you caught my attention with this little twister of a limerick! ! ! You are also changing my opinions about limericks in general... favorably!
Ways of the world today. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Enjoyed this interesting Limerick........................................................................
A very pleasant write. I'm just so in love with your limericks. They say a lot in a few words. Very well done. A10.
A joke recently heard and turned into limerick is really praisable. A beautiful Limerick brilliantly penned.10.