Monday, December 19, 2016

Limerick- 99. Not A Lie Comments

Rating: 5.0

To the husband asked his crazy wife
'Have you slept with other women in life'?
He said- 'Only with you dear
With others, awake...! Why fear'?
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COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2018

A joke recently heard and turned into limerick is really praisable. A beautiful Limerick brilliantly penned.10.

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Bri Edwards 27 July 2018

today this goes into August's showcase! bri ;) it should show up later today or tomorrow. thanks.

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Valsa George 28 July 2018

Thank you Bri for putting this silly poem of mine in your prestigious showcase......!

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Loke Kok Yee 06 July 2017

The poor girl is in need of English lessons! Ha! Ha! Ha! Thanks Valsa.

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Mj Lemon 15 February 2017

I think this is brilliant, Valsa. You address with such fantastic humour an issue that that can be tragic, or at the very least laced with sadness and discomfort. I am amazed at how readily appeased so many people are by mere technicalities. Where would we humans be without the technicalities that allow us to face the turmoil of life?

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Nika Mcguin 18 January 2017

Its funny to me the husband said with others awake! So in reality he has slept with other women but he doesn't want her to get mad lol. She herself had to know what the answer was already, she just wanted to be comforted. But hey if that's what saves their relationship to each his/her own. This was an interesting little piece, well written.~

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Susan Williams 08 January 2017

At least the man was honest- -I don't know why the woman asked if she was just going to turn a blind eye.... or maybe she really was just asking a literal question... Valsa, you caught my attention with this little twister of a limerick! ! ! You are also changing my opinions about limericks in general... favorably!

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 December 2016

Ways of the world today. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Hans Vr 27 December 2016

very well written and really funny

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Bri Edwards 26 December 2016

i wonder, do you have a limerick-69? ? ?

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Akhtar Jawad 22 December 2016

Enjoyed this interesting Limerick........................................................................

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 December 2016

Interesting answer to wife's question.

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Nosheen Irfan 20 December 2016

A very pleasant write. I'm just so in love with your limericks. They say a lot in a few words. Very well done. A10.

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