Monday, December 19, 2016

Limerick- 98. Cupid's Itch Comments

Rating: 5.0

While some saw her as a nasty bitch
To some, she was a beguiling witch
But seductive were her eyes
Melting him like ice
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Valsa George
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Aniruddha Pathak 08 December 2019

Amidst a Cupid's itch, of a nasty, and of a beguiling witch, a man's is a bit of each of these. Should i say a nasty limerick, a beguiling one, or one that gives some itch? Again a bit of all. Good one.

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Loke Kok Yee 06 July 2017

A perfect limerick on the imperfection of man! A furtive glance will get them all worked up. Ha! Ha! Ha! Thanks Valsa.

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Tom Billsborough 15 February 2017

We men are easily beguiled by beautiful eyes! But do we complain! Very sharp Limerick, Valsa.

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Susan Williams 06 January 2017

Now that's a limerick with a bite! ! ! You never cease to amaze me with your talent! 10! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 December 2016

Switch, hitch, pitch! On seeing her. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Hans Vr 27 December 2016

beautiful, so enjoyable to read!

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Bri Edwards 26 December 2016

eyes/ice............yes, i 'see' the rhyme. you are giving me 'a run for my money' **. ** give a run for money give you a run for your money to be as good at something as someone who is known to be extremely good He was a very good actor and could have given any professional a run for his money. See also: give, money, run Cambridge Dictionary of American Idioms Copyright © Cambridge University Press 2003. Reproduced with permission. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Cupid's itch? ? ? ask your neighborhood pharmacist/'chemist'. bri ;) and i like Akhtar's comment-poem. ;)

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Valsa George 27 December 2016

Thank you Bri for teaching me a new phrase! Unfortunately for the Cupid's itch, no pharmacist will have a medicine! Enjoyed your comment!

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Akhtar Jawad 20 December 2016

No doubt her love is too grueling, She is cause of the deadly dueling, But she has no alternate, Love is man’s ancient fate, Man is fire and woman is fueling.

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Valsa George 27 December 2016

Yes, Akhtar ji! Love is indeed grueling at times! Thank you!

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Nosheen Irfan 20 December 2016

Another excellent limerick to your credit. Small things in life turned to immortal verse. Simply struck by it. A super 10.

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