Limerick - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Limerick -

Rating: 4.8

In a jungle where shadows grow long,
a monkey danced to a wild, joyful song.
but the lion, so grand,
with a roar did demand,
"Be still, for in my reign you belong! "

In a town where the bold politician roamed,
with promises made but rarely honed,
the people did cheer,
yet whispered, "Oh dear,
Is the truth just a seed that's yet sown? "

Friday, October 18, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: limerick
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 18 October 2024

Excellent Limerick, Dr. M. Asim Nehal, humorously presented and thought-provokingly finalised. I have enjoyed enormously 5 Stars Full

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 October 2024

Bravo Asim It made me smile TFS

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 01 November 2024

Limericks both bold, beautiful and brilliant.........Top score

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Rebecca Navarre 30 October 2024

Brilliantly composed! .. Endless 10' And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 30 October 2024

Those in higher power roam with, , , , Promises made but rarely honed...

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 October 2024

Great read limericks! Brilliantly crafted and executed!

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Rob Lamberton 19 October 2024

Thank you Asim!

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