Thursday, October 20, 2016

Limerick- 94. His Sad Plight Comments

Rating: 5.0

Stung by a bee, he fell down from a tree
Badly broke his hands and knee
Soon chased by a dog,
Fell tripping on a log
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Valsa George
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Dr Antony Theodore 03 December 2018

Badly broke his hands and knee bee and the dog and the log....... unfortunate is he..... rendering the emotion so well. tony

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Susan Williams 11 January 2017

We do have a habit of turning little hillocks of problems into great big mountains of plights. Good job. These limericks are not easy to write and I am so enjoying yours. 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2016

Dog fell tripping on a log Jug then danced in fog Wonder was observed Life was submerged High plight was sad...oh so wonderful poem is read. This Limerick gives real fun and deep thought too. Amazing! ..10

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Nosheen Irfan 27 October 2016

Hahaha. A hilariously funny write. We all need a laugh sometimes. Thanku Valsa for a hearty laughter.10

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 23 October 2016

That is really a bad plight. Well-rhymed limerick. (10)

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 21 October 2016

Your poem will make the victim laugh in the sorry state.

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 October 2016

Facing the hurdles of life! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bisy Untan 20 October 2016

Thank you.Is it the same man mentioned earlier.? Good Limericks!

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