Friday, July 22, 2016

Limerick-91. No More A Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

Now that he is an adolescent
Visited by dreams iridescent
He no more wants candy
But a little brandy
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Valsa George
COMMENTS
Rajnish Manga 14 August 2016

Oh! Wonderful. Even without seeing the title, one would have guessed it right. Lovely limerick. Thanks a lot.

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 August 2016

Wow....That's Fantastic Limerick. Child is growing in its own dreams, though addiction to anything is not good.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 03 August 2016

His dreams sure are indecent!

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Akhtar Jawad 29 July 2016

Addiction of anything makes a child insane, it's parent's responsibility to keep him at arms length from any addiction. A wonderful limerick with a great message.

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Savita Tyagi 27 July 2016

Great limerick! In someways it represents today's culture so well. Every body is angry for not getting what they want. Instant gratification they want with out much effort. Thanks for sharing Valsa.

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Dear Valsa, Another excellent Limerick! Enjoyed it very much.

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Intoxicants both, candy and brandy One sweet, the other bitter to taste Yet the truth be said candidly We humans have it in our fate...... (Candy to cigars to brandy...the natural evolution of boyhood to macho, gentleman perhaps?)

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Nosheen Irfan 24 July 2016

Wowww. another superb limerick. An impalpable way of pointing out an evil is more effective.10 for sure.

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Loke Kok Yee 24 July 2016

Your limerick is so nice But then I am not surprise You always have a way Which I will find one day But I'll need your good advice thanks Valsa

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Valsa George 24 July 2016

A limerick for a limerick.... my friend How well your witty words blend I feel excited, Far more delighted, By what you have thoughtfully penned! Thanks a lot!

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Rajnish Manga 14 August 2016

Lucky to have received a limerick for your limerick. Readers get the Bonus. Thanks.

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Kelly Kurt 23 July 2016

Addiction is a nasty thing. Well portrayed in this limerick

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 23 July 2016

A stick of candy turns into a glass of brandy. Funny and nice.

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 July 2016

A little brandy! Nicely written. Thanks for sharing.

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M Asim Nehal 23 July 2016

Ha ha ha what a sign of growth in this modern world.Nice one Madam, Welcome back.10++++

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 July 2016

A meaningful and thought provoking limerick reflecting the present state of common scenarios in the society in which we live.Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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