Now that he is an adolescent
Visited by dreams iridescent
He no more wants candy
But a little brandy
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Wow....That's Fantastic Limerick. Child is growing in its own dreams, though addiction to anything is not good.
Addiction of anything makes a child insane, it's parent's responsibility to keep him at arms length from any addiction. A wonderful limerick with a great message.
Great limerick! In someways it represents today's culture so well. Every body is angry for not getting what they want. Instant gratification they want with out much effort. Thanks for sharing Valsa.
Dear Valsa, Another excellent Limerick! Enjoyed it very much.
Intoxicants both, candy and brandy One sweet, the other bitter to taste Yet the truth be said candidly We humans have it in our fate...... (Candy to cigars to brandy...the natural evolution of boyhood to macho, gentleman perhaps?)
Wowww. another superb limerick. An impalpable way of pointing out an evil is more effective.10 for sure.
Your limerick is so nice But then I am not surprise You always have a way Which I will find one day But I'll need your good advice thanks Valsa
A limerick for a limerick.... my friend How well your witty words blend I feel excited, Far more delighted, By what you have thoughtfully penned! Thanks a lot!
Lucky to have received a limerick for your limerick. Readers get the Bonus. Thanks.
A stick of candy turns into a glass of brandy. Funny and nice.
Ha ha ha what a sign of growth in this modern world.Nice one Madam, Welcome back.10++++
A meaningful and thought provoking limerick reflecting the present state of common scenarios in the society in which we live.Thanks for sharing.10 points.
Oh! Wonderful. Even without seeing the title, one would have guessed it right. Lovely limerick. Thanks a lot.