Thursday, September 1, 2016

Limerick-90. Tolerance Comments

Rating: 4.9

'Accept that to suffer is life
Tolerate your opponent without strife'
To this he did abide
But silently sighed
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Valsa George
COMMENTS
LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 December 2021

Truly I'm lovin' it Bravo!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 December 2021

A wonderful Limerick dear madam! Beautifully written...Top score!

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Mj Lemon 09 April 2017

There is a humourous twist to this verse, but you touch on a profound, sad reality for some. A brilliant poem, Valsa. You have elevated the limerick.

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Susan Williams 03 February 2017

Sad to think that many marriages we think are happy and content may only be a mutual tolerance. Valsa, this time I searched out a limerick to read! For me, that is like saying I climbed Mt. Everest! I enjoy your limericks very much- -you have a subtly and a grace that so many other poets don't give theirs. Well done. Very well done.10+++++++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 October 2016

To this he did abide. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Muhammad Ali 05 October 2016

Surprising for me the true nature of man and your courage to say. brilliant

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 September 2016

Enjoyable limerick really, so wisely presented.

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Stephen Katona 10 September 2016

I love this clever, funny limerick. Thank you for making me smile so much.

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Hans Vr 09 September 2016

wonderful. The surprise in the end is sooooo good.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 06 September 2016

That is a beautiful limerick. A woman writing a wife-baiting poem is a wonder. (10)

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Abduhoo Salamath 04 September 2016

nice advice..with beautiful way of approach...well done.

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Savita Tyagi 02 September 2016

I just shared your limerick on my FB page. I hope I have have your permission.

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Valsa George 03 September 2016

I am only happy about it.... as long as you acknowledge my authorship! Thank you Savita!

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Savita Tyagi 02 September 2016

Wonderful! Humar at its best!

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 September 2016

Concluding lines Wonderful..Beautiful from your pen. Loved it.

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Nosheen Irfan 02 September 2016

Hahaha. This is hilarious. Ending is really clever. Sounds serious in the beginning but that unexpected humor at the end makes the reader laugh heartily.10

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 01 September 2016

Silently sighed is a real punch line. Beautifully inserted.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 September 2016

Lady Bliss I did that when she was a miss And I was content with a kiss Now with other old men My staring at bold women Turns madam in a Lady Bliss.

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Valsa George 02 September 2016

Ha... ha! ! Thank you Akhtar ji!

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Kelly Kurt 01 September 2016

Good advice with a humorous twist

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