'Accept that to suffer is life
Tolerate your opponent without strife'
To this he did abide
But silently sighed
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A wonderful Limerick dear madam! Beautifully written...Top score!
There is a humourous twist to this verse, but you touch on a profound, sad reality for some. A brilliant poem, Valsa. You have elevated the limerick.
Sad to think that many marriages we think are happy and content may only be a mutual tolerance. Valsa, this time I searched out a limerick to read! For me, that is like saying I climbed Mt. Everest! I enjoy your limericks very much- -you have a subtly and a grace that so many other poets don't give theirs. Well done. Very well done.10+++++++++
To this he did abide. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Surprising for me the true nature of man and your courage to say. brilliant
I love this clever, funny limerick. Thank you for making me smile so much.
That is a beautiful limerick. A woman writing a wife-baiting poem is a wonder. (10)
nice advice..with beautiful way of approach...well done.
I just shared your limerick on my FB page. I hope I have have your permission.
I am only happy about it.... as long as you acknowledge my authorship! Thank you Savita!
Concluding lines Wonderful..Beautiful from your pen. Loved it.
Hahaha. This is hilarious. Ending is really clever. Sounds serious in the beginning but that unexpected humor at the end makes the reader laugh heartily.10
Silently sighed is a real punch line. Beautifully inserted.
Lady Bliss I did that when she was a miss And I was content with a kiss Now with other old men My staring at bold women Turns madam in a Lady Bliss.
Truly I'm lovin' it Bravo!