Limerick-88. Futile Attempt Comments

This Limerick is much interesting. I appreciate the way of composing. Visited time and again.

She called out to alert all// she was sensitive!

plight of roadside romeos.nice cartoon.very cheerful limerick!

Very funny this Limerick is really and this makes laugh. Such think happens very often. Beautiful girl under a tree creates humor. Wisely penned! 10....

His futile attempt went down the drain.... Girls should be alert from these good for nothing men. Nice thought.

No he he didn't runaway, he saw another girl more beautiful and more practical. The girl was served with ice cream and cold soft beverage. He paid the bill and said goodbye so long we meet again. The girl replied, sorry, tonight I am flying back home, thanks for your hospitality. So sad when he turned back he saw the previous girl, and she said, I am a native, I think it's now lunch time.

Nice one. Well rhymed. Humorous too. You have drawn the image, I am sure. (10)

Fear! ! The girl stood to her feet. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Nice lesson for all those peeping toms.

Dear Valsa, This is such a funny and enjoyable poem. Really had a good laugh! The picture is great. I suppose, this is a common situation in our land! A full 10!

Ha ha ha! Funny! Expecting more against these social evils.