Monday, May 2, 2016

Limerick- 85. Embarrassment Comments

Rating: 5.0

The food tasted so yummy
He crammed it in his tummy
Soon he wanted to poo
But there was no loo
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Valsa George
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 12 August 2022

Bravo! Valsa Bravo!

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Bri Edwards 17 October 2020

4 years later i've reread and offer additional input: crummy: " informal dirty, unpleasant, or of poor quality." Yes, he COULD have been running " dirty" . but...how about? : The food tasted so yummy He crammed it in his tummy Soon he wanted to poo But there was no loo He ran & grabbed hold of " Mummy" . bri ;)

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 February 2019

beautiful humorous writings

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 July 2016

A very nice humour! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2016

such a private poem! at least you disguised yourself well, writing he. people really should carry supplies for such 'emergencies'. i always carry an empty plastic bread bag (or two, OR three) and a partial roll of toilet paper. it helps if you have one of those snap-it-flaps in the seat of your pants also. bri :)

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Tom Billsborough 21 May 2016

Very funny and I've the illustration, honey bunny! Tom billsborough

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M Asim Nehal 16 May 2016

Ha ha ha...Lovely and funny.

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Loke Kok Yee 10 May 2016

But for him it was not funny Thanks Valsa-10

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Nosheen Irfan 06 May 2016

Can't help laughing. Thanks Valsa for some real funny n humorous writing.

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Savita Tyagi 03 May 2016

Hahaha! I needed a laugh. Thanks.

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Can't stop my laugh.

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Kelly Kurt 03 May 2016

Funny. I have been in that situation too. : -)

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