Limerick- 83. The Trinity Comments

A marvelous Limerick is touchingly delineated by you. I appreciate the way of presentation. Thanks for sharing.

Unless in cash you give Nothing will ever move Conceit, Deceit, - form a trinity.facts......... well portrayed. tony

Conceit, Deceit, - form a trinity. Quite true dear poetess. Corruption the mighty devil has overpowered the ethics of. Let us mourn for the lost charm of humanity

Corruption is the mighty deity/All prone to it, clergy or laity...Amazing limerick dear madam! I love the way you invent things.....Enjoyed the humor (10)

As I see it, all the attributes of a successful politician, Thanks Valsa.

Corruption! Destroying the systems on earth; putting us far behind the truth. Nice piece of work.

Very true...a beautiful limerick.

You have described the opposite of Holy Trinity with amazing clarity in a few words.

A frank appraisal of what's happening around us! Conceit, Deceit and Lust are three awful ingredients that can ruin an individual as well as a whole nation. Powerfully presented through a Limerick. A full score for you, Valsa!

A succinct description of truth we all know and are victim of, but find helpless in eradicating the same.

Thats a powerful write. In this Limerick you have laid bare the bitter reality of this world in a light-hearted way but it hits hard nevertheless. A plus.

The simple advice that I have learned is practice what you preach, if you cannot stand up to the beliefs you represent and act against that what the teachers stand for that creates hypocrisy. Conceit, Deceit, Lust- form a trinity That is the truth, and an ugly trinity it is. Bravo for saying it