Monday, February 1, 2016

Limerick-78- Queen Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sit in the glare of computer screen
Fanciful thoughts, I try to glean
I am a crazy poet
To the world a misfit
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 July 2019

It is a beautiful limerick with fun and humor. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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Kevin Patrick 29 March 2019

A queen whose words are as clever as they are fun! not just a great limerick, but a good summary of a modern poet!

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Akhtar Jawad 26 January 2018

Let the poet pass a few happy moments, in an imaginary world, where there are are beauty and dreams for him.

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Wes Vogler 17 February 2016

Not too bad now tidy up lines three and four. The ogre

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Kavya . 04 February 2016

Yes you are indeed a queen in the world of poets! A source of inspiration to many budding poets like us.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 February 2016

You are a queen among poets There is no doubt.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 February 2016

Nice work! Going into another level. Thanks for sharing.

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Kanav Justa 02 February 2016

Haha.. I doubt it, you must be a queen in real world as well. Your poems speaks volumes of you

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Valsa George 02 February 2016

Thank you Kanav.......! Welcome back! A limerick is often a ridiculous exaggeration!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 02 February 2016

Fantastic limerick. It requires a lot of guts and maturity to a cut a joke on such realizations. The virtual world created by computers and such gadgets imbibe such notions while facing the screen and creating some thing on it with clicks on the mouse', at our will. Thanks for the sharing of a thought provoking limerick and reiterating the reality that poets are misfit in a practical world.10 points.

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Valsa George 02 February 2016

Thank you for this fine reading of the limerick....! Yes, to a great extent poets are misfits in a practical world

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Kelly Kurt 02 February 2016

In the world of poetry, we can be who we wish. : -)

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