Tuesday, January 26, 2016

Limerick.77. Mischievous Tom Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tom was too naughty, mischief, his joy
Neither his parents' pride nor others' envy
He would slyly pass
Break someone's window glass
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 August 2019

A clear picture of impishness has been painted here smoothly. The picture with catapult shows mischief of the boy. Enjoyed. Thanks.

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Bri Edwards 08 January 2018

and, YES, i did use a slingshot as a boy, but i did more damage with bow and arrow and BB gun. : (: (

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Bri Edwards 08 January 2018

i won't comment on the 2nd line, as i don't understand the following (completely) which i copied from 'Google'. Google is a busy gal! ! ! ! ................. The standard form of a limerick is a stanza of five lines, with the first, second and fifth rhyming with one another and having three feet of three syllables each; and the shorter third and fourth lines also rhyming with each other, but having only two feet of three syllables...................bri :)

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Bri Edwards 08 January 2018

SO! i finally see how members take liberties with my good name when i'm not looking (see Loke's comment and your reply to it) . : (: ( i was ONLY getting food for my poor family's table! yes, if i hit the fruit vendor enough times when he isn't looking, he runs, leaving all his fruit for me! bri ;)

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Valsa George 10 January 2018

Yes, Loke should be penalized for spreading such scandal at your back Bri....! !

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Loke Kok Yee 05 January 2018

Was that Bri Edwards in his young days?

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Valsa George 06 January 2018

I am sure he might have done such things and more! Nice identification, Loke

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Nosheen Irfan 03 February 2016

Thats such a perfect picture of childhood. Mischief is the beauty of childhood however exasperating it may be.

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Kelly Kurt 26 January 2016

Impishness is part of childhood, but learning right from wrong is also taught by consequences

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 26 January 2016

Excellent Limerick! I liked the last line. It ended when one ‘handled' the boy! Full Vote, Valsa!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 26 January 2016

Little Tom, mischief, was his joy In his hands a sling shot his toy Rest is simple to read and enjoy.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 January 2016

The boy! Who needs a better training. Thanks for sharing.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 26 January 2016

Takes back to our boyhood, which was filled with lots and lots of similar mischievous acts. Nice one.

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