Saturday, November 14, 2015

Limerick.68. A Glutton's Plight Comments

Rating: 5.0

My neighbour is a real glutton
At a feast, he gobbled much mutton,
Besides all the meat,
He ate piles n' piles of sweet!
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Valsa George
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 December 2020

So humorous with captivating rhyme and images. A write imbued with wit and humor, the way a limerick should be written. Five Stars! To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 December 2020

I just admire your limericks! ! ! ! I am reading this amazing piece at dawn and I am laughing. What a way to start a day! ! Your keen and straightforward observation on people's behavior made your limericks so unique and very entertaining.

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Anjandev Roy 31 October 2019

Well composed. Thanks. anjandev roy.

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Mj Lemon 30 January 2019

Great Limerick, Valsa. I think I'll consult this one on select holidays. A great verse.

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Narayana Aghalaya 04 April 2018

he should have trousers made of rubber - next time he indulges in a food binge!

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Hazel Durham 24 November 2015

Funny, entertaining and great rhyming, a perfect Limerick!

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Akhtar Jawad 15 November 2015

So he must be looking an aristocrat with a belt around his neck. Enjoyed. By the way, it's not so much good to have such a a deep look at the neighbors. Once I did it and when she entered the gates of her house, I turned back and saw my wife in a very dangerous mood!

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Kelly Kurt 14 November 2015

That's why I wear sweat pants with an elastic waist.: -) Very funny, Valsa. Thanks

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Loke Kok Yee 14 November 2015

when a glutton goes to a feast he must wear a belt thanks Valsa

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Souren Mondal 14 November 2015

Poor man should have fasted for a few days before he ate that much.. It might have made some space in there: p Thank you for the poem and the gigle ma'am..

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Pijush Biswas 14 November 2015

Very interesting. A neighbour who eats much often gobbles much mutton when a feast is arranged, afterwards can't button of his trousers. like this thanks

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M Asim Nehal 14 November 2015

Ha ha ha...Show off is always dangerous and one should control it nice humour....Liked it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2015

Interesting to get fun in giggling. He can not button the trouser in such a fun motive. Amazing drafting shared again...10

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