Saturday, November 14, 2015

Limerick.67. Reversion Comments

Rating: 5.0

At twenty, he was fierce as tiger
At thirty, venomous as viper
Drank a lot of liquor
Grew more n' more bitter
...
Read full text

Valsa George
COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 03 April 2019

Revisited this limerick for its attraction and nice theme. Thank you again dear madam.

0 0 Reply
Narayana Aghalaya 04 April 2018

we age so fast- our life can be compressed into a limerick!

0 0 Reply
Edward Kofi Louis 21 January 2016

Yes! He is now very old and weak. Thanks for sharing.

0 0 Reply
Souren Mondal 26 November 2015

SEVEN AGES OF MAN, shortened down to their bare essentials with an appropriate dose of humour! Thanks for sharing ma'am.

0 0 Reply
Hazel Durham 24 November 2015

Brilliant Limerick Valsa, with great rhyming and very funny!

0 0 Reply
T Rajan Evol 15 November 2015

Superb limerick, I enjoyed its humour.

0 0 Reply

It is funny enjoying mam,

1 0 Reply
Loke Kok Yee 14 November 2015

I'm surprised he managed to reach eighty! thanks Valsa

1 0 Reply
M Asim Nehal 14 November 2015

Ha ha ha.... With age life changes so............Lovely limerick Madam, Enjoyable...10+++

2 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2015

Very amazing and fun giving Limerick. This is very humorous and inclined with deep thought. Poets will definitely think deeper and answer the eight years old diaper thought. This is left for other readers. Wisely penned....10

1 0 Reply
Close
Error Success