Sunday, August 18, 2013

Limerick.6- Usain Bolt (Re Submission) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Usain Bolt, the 'Cheetah’, like a thunder bolt,
Dashed and darted towards his final halt
With all his might combined
Pushing his opponents behind
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Valsa George
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Anjandev Roy 26 February 2020

Brilliantly written. anjandev roy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 February 2020

My son who is a civil engineer was a sprinter, who has played state level athletic meets. Bolt is his role model! He is slow starter but great finisher! I don't take this poem in its funny sense but it's real..10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 August 2018

A beautiful limerick on Athletic Meet and Usain Bolt is being nicely executed.Amusing one. Thanks for sharing.

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Loke Kok Yee 29 October 2015

in poetry you are are Usain Bolt Thanks valsa.10

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Akhtar Jawad 16 December 2014

a nice tribute to an athlete............................

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Dinesan Madathil 20 August 2013

A fine limerick and it is proper as per the format... Usain Bolt deserves the attention of all. The first statement of Thomas Robinson amazes me and every poet has to live and travel along in a bigger world seeing the obviously visible all along..

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David Wood 20 August 2013

That man sure can run Valsa, it will take someone special to beat him.

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Tribhawan Kaul 20 August 2013

Beautifully penned with a touch of humour and in a way a tribute to Bolt's talent.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 19 August 2013

Beautifully described the Cheetah grabbing the finish line. Your poem like a bullet matches the speed of Usain Bolt. Thank you.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 19 August 2013

This poem has presented the grace in the Ground as such Congratulations. As Virgina Woolf tells the form is to the interest of the writer.(In he essay, Modern Fiction)

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 August 2013

Wow..Wonderful poem...Beautiful descriptions.. something quiet different. Loved reading it. Thank you Valsa for the Inspiring comments on my poem..It brings positivity in me...Thanks a lot.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 19 August 2013

speed with grace is what makes a bolt. lovely write, Valsa.

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Aswath Raman 19 August 2013

Bolt is really amazing! Sometimes I think he is a man born to run! Nice limerick ma'am!

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Gajanan Mishra 18 August 2013

making the world wonder, good write.

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