Saturday, October 17, 2015

Limerick.59. Gorilla Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was a man from Manila
Who lived in an old forlorn villa
He looked a hairy ape
With a funny shape
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 October 2020

From a man of Manila to a Gorilla you have amazingly observed lifestyle. This Limerick gives us unlimited fun and we feel very happy. This poem is excellently penned..5 stars.

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Bri Edwards 17 August 2020

He looks like one of my brothers. I suggest: " They" for " That" & some more..... MINOR....edits. oh! and punctuation? I edited mine as well! I've a good friend named Valsa... who lives in a hut made of balsa. She's a real Asian-Indian cutie! She 'gets by' on her beauty, .... & the fine, tangy taste of her salsa! bri :)

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Narayana Aghalaya 04 April 2018

funny, but a bit of Manila-bashing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 October 2017

Beautiful limerick full of humour and fun. Enjoyed with photo provided. Thank u madam.

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M Asim Nehal 18 October 2015

After this limerick you will be banned in Manila.............ha ha ha, Liked it..

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Sanjukta Nag 17 October 2015

You make me laugh each time I read your limericks! Thank you ma'am. Very very funny.

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Loke Kok Yee 17 October 2015

My missus asked how did my picture got into your limerick. Can't be Kelly he is too fair! Thanks Valsa

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Valsa George 17 October 2015

So there are more apes than I imagined....... Quite funny, Loke!

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Kelly Kurt 17 October 2015

Where did you find my picture? : -)

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Valsa George 17 October 2015

Oh...... can't locate! I never knew it was you....... Enjoyed your comment!

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 17 October 2015

This made me smile.Unexpected again. thought it was on a big monkey and surprised me with a Monkey man

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 October 2015

Very interesting limerick. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.

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