There was a man from Manila
Who lived in an old forlorn villa
He looked a hairy ape
With a funny shape
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He looks like one of my brothers. I suggest: " They" for " That" & some more..... MINOR....edits. oh! and punctuation? I edited mine as well! I've a good friend named Valsa... who lives in a hut made of balsa. She's a real Asian-Indian cutie! She 'gets by' on her beauty, .... & the fine, tangy taste of her salsa! bri :)
Beautiful limerick full of humour and fun. Enjoyed with photo provided. Thank u madam.
After this limerick you will be banned in Manila.............ha ha ha, Liked it..
You make me laugh each time I read your limericks! Thank you ma'am. Very very funny.
My missus asked how did my picture got into your limerick. Can't be Kelly he is too fair! Thanks Valsa
Oh...... can't locate! I never knew it was you....... Enjoyed your comment!
This made me smile.Unexpected again. thought it was on a big monkey and surprised me with a Monkey man
Very interesting limerick. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.
From a man of Manila to a Gorilla you have amazingly observed lifestyle. This Limerick gives us unlimited fun and we feel very happy. This poem is excellently penned..5 stars.