Monday, August 31, 2015

Limerick.50. Heaven's Justice Comments

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He stood so shocked at Heaven’s door
Not by its splendor nor its décor
But by the folks already in
Those who had very many sin
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Valsa George
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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 October 2020

An excellent limerick dear madam! Appreciated and admired. Top 🌟

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Narayana Aghalaya 04 April 2018

this is a lovely limerick! Man is judgemental - in his view pickpockets, .. are sinners and should not be in heaven. God has analysed their cases on merit -why so and so is a pickpocket, or a prostitute.. and on merit allowed them in. Our hero, may not be upto the mark!

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Chinedu Dike 30 December 2017

Goes to show that the divine judgement of God which scrutinizes mind and heart of man, is beyond three dimensional comprehension of even the wisest of men. Poignant piece of poetry nicely brought forth with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing Valsa.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 November 2017

Those who had very many sin Pick pockets, prostitutes, rogues and more... are punished as per heaven justice. Beautifullly inscribed. Thanks for sharing.

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Loke Kok Yee 30 September 2015

Looks like there's hope for me after all. Thanks Valsa.-10

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Hazel Durham 06 September 2015

Great write, thought provoking, God's justice is mighty, there is goodness in everyone!

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 04 September 2015

Good sarcastic limerick. That is why perhaps it is called heaven - everyone can flourish.

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Ruby Mostazir 02 September 2015

I agree with akhter jawad...he knows everything! ! Yes he knows abt every heart.....and he have lots of mercy :)

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 02 September 2015

Liked it! On a personal note thank you for sharing your knowledge on Limerick.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 September 2015

Pick pockets, prostitutes, rogues and more, even your friend Akhtar Jawad, are helpless before the fate. We know nothing but He knows everything!

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Bernard Snyder 01 September 2015

Deep imagination required. Interesting poem Valsa. Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 31 August 2015

Forgiveness allows entrance to all

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