Friday, December 21, 2018

Limerick 5 - Lucky Puppy Comments

Rating: 5.0

My daughter bought a white new puppy
Clearing pee and poo she keeps it happy
All other works left pending
Kids and husband help lending
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Valsa George 30 December 2018

A good limerick! Indeed that puppy is lucky to get all the care and attention of your daughter and the entire family!

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True Valsa George. The puppy is now luckier than others. Thank you

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 December 2018

An amazing little poem! Enjoyed the humor! Thanks dear sir for sharing!

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Thank you Dr. Dillip for the supporting words

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Devi Krishnakumar 22 December 2018

A good one. The happiness of the daughter is beautifully portrayed here.

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Thank you Devi.The puppy is more happy

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 December 2018

What a puppy? High born happy puppy! being happy with the happiness of the daughter caring for the puppy. is it not a sign that her heart love, can l ove and find joy in innocent joy.. thank u for this revealing poem my dear Parmeswaran....... tony

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Thank you Dr.Tony. My concern is that the people around the puppy work hard to make him happy

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