I want my limericks to be a bit of jest
That would be seen by all as the best
But when I write
They turn out to be trite
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This is every poet's dilemma. Intention is more important. If we are sincere, we get just what we want! Lovely limerick.
Your Limericks are always fresh with new ideas and make us laugh full throttle. Thanks for these superb creations.
Your limericks are widely read and enjoyed. These are always interesting.
Valsa, your Limericks are great. I enjoy them the most and learn from them.
Limericks are meant to be, trite It is in making that humorous, where you succeed
ur limericks are indeed interesting and bright never even think of them as a trite
Your limericks are a great delight Hidden sadness takes its flight Thank you.
That is what all writers feel about their works. But, rest assured your limericks are full of fun.
Well, if I may, your limericks are almost always good, there is no doubt, but this one, you are right, has turned out a bit trite, but that happens to the best of poets, and you are.