Wednesday, August 12, 2015

Limerick.45. Fat Don Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don weighs a ton and is round as a bun
Seeing chubby Don is always fun
On the road he waddles
On a chair he straddles
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Valsa George
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Narayana Aghalaya 04 April 2018

wow! another funny example!

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 05 September 2015

Truly, a humorous one,

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Rajnish Manga 25 August 2015

Let us hope that the tiger understands the situation and withdraws from the contest. Enjoyed the poem.

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Hazel Durham 21 August 2015

Great Limerick, very funny I really enjoyed it!

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Akhtar Jawad 18 August 2015

I think he is still unmarried otherwise he would be lean like me. Enjoyed, Really enjoyed it.

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Ayman Parray 14 August 2015

I hope you don't have Don Vito Corleone in mind. He is my favourite :) Great Limerick

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Kelly Kurt 13 August 2015

The tiger will have a nice meal.: -)

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 13 August 2015

Laughing... the imagination.... It seems you can write on anything....

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Kavya . 13 August 2015

lolllzzzz too good Mam

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Ruby Mostazir 13 August 2015

I became a great fan of urs limerick...you are really an amazing talented writer..... :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 August 2015

Marvellous. Funny and amusing.....10

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 12 August 2015

Good one, funny and rhyming.

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