Monday, July 27, 2015

Limerick.42. What Is What Comments

Rating: 5.0

Compressed carbon is called diamond
Cut land in water is called island
Beaten copper is wire
Love bitten man, lover
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Narayana Aghalaya 04 April 2018

very interesting! husbands are under tremendous pressure to deliver, beaten down by inflation and cut up with everyone in this world! they are not hard like diamond, not ductile like copper, nor tranquil like an island! You have captured many qualities of a typical husband in your lovely limerick!

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Loke Kok Yee 30 September 2015

True love! True love! True love! That's what happens when a man falls in love-10 BTW, I hope it was not your good husband who gave you the inspiration to write this humorous limerick.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 05 September 2015

Truly, truly and truly indeed

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Rajnish Manga 05 August 2015

So many physical changes bring about a chemical change in the shape of a husband. Just fantastic. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

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Rajkamal P.j 04 August 2015

A good piece of work. Great conclusion.congrats

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 July 2015

The last line seems to miss the characteristic described in the fourth line. Don't know if it is intentional. Nice and humorous.

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Ayman Parray 29 July 2015

Maybe I don't want to be a husband anymore after reading this one. It is really that good. I mean after laughing for a while I am beginning to take it seriously :) Limerick of all limericks enjoyed thoroughly. Thank you

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Akhtar Jawad 29 July 2015

Valsa is it your confession? What ever it may be it's wonderful............................10

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OMG! Wives are great compressors, cutters and beaters! LOL! (10)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 July 2015

Compressed, cut and beaten man is husband .... wisely and peculiarly composed. Best poem I like most. Thanks for sharing. ....10

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Om Chawla 28 July 2015

What, What What? Thats being mischievous.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 28 July 2015

Wow! What a wonderful discovery! Congratulations for having a husband of that sort.10+

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Valsa George 29 July 2015

Ha.... Ha! Humour for humour....... Enjoyed your humour sir!

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