Friday, June 5, 2015

Limerick.36. Obesity Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was a woman named Malory
She didn’t care for the calorie
All that she got, she ate
And grew into a sight!
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Valsa George
COMMENTS
Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 July 2020

Amazing and entertaining limerick imbued with a great message on the maintenance of good health. Another clever write masterfully crafted by the great Poetess. Loved reading it.10++

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Magadha Rani 13 March 2020

An amazing limerick dear madam...liked it. thank you for sharing....(Poetess Magadha)

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Rajesh Thankappan 24 June 2015

Gluttony awarded with body fats that are real eyesores.

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Amitava Sur 18 June 2015

O' my dear Malory, I'm excited on your obsession on Calorie May be now you move through a lorry But don't worry on your intake of Calorie We arranged one crane with a trolly! ! ..... ha ha....my next limerick with the same subject.

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Valsa George 18 June 2015

Ha....Ha....! Really enjoyed your version of the limerick Amitava!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 June 2015

Great fun. Palatable composition. Enjoyed. Thanks for posting.

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Kavya . 08 June 2015

lol quite hilarious Mam....live to eat....lol

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Another beautiful one. Enjoyed it.

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Akhtar Jawad 06 June 2015

Enjoyed the fun of the poem but the question remains as to who is she?

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Lyn Paul 05 June 2015

If we looked for the reasons and could solve why people are over eating there may not be such a problem. Your words are full of brightness.

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Queeny Gona 05 June 2015

ha ha ha Mam forgive me for having laughed on reading the limerick. It is really hilarious and insightful too mam!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 05 June 2015

Eating indiscriminately has its sorry effects. Nice lesson to learn through a limerick that may sound funny.

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