Limerick.32.Glutton Comments

One can't control hunger. Poor lad has done so. Is it his crime? This poem is composed in a humours way. Beautifully executed. Five stars.

The glaring Limerick points to the poverty of the and hunger of the small boy to whom the flavour of the dish might have been a temptation. The significance is that you have made it a super Limerick as charming as the taste of the dish...10

eat drink, be merry, world is full of variety don't harm other just live in legitimacy let them tell you are glutton earn true, survive with no swoon eat to live, live to eat, no problem, truth is free

Poor fellow, there is no control over hunger. A nice limerick to sum up.

This limerick put a smile on my face! Wonderfully composed!

Oh, I express my sympathy to the poor lad who is a gobbler of mutton (is it a crime? ? ? ?) ! A beautiful limerick carrying delicate humor! You have chosen fitting rhyming words! Thanks dear madam for sharing……10………………..Dillip

Nice funny rhymes. Next time the lad should be advised not to gobble any mutton, but of course he is at liberty to gobble chicken, pork etc. Anyway his gobbling of mutton has helped Valsa ma'am to write these humorous lines. So my thanks goes out to him!

Thanks for the great rhymes Valsa! Thaks for the call to sympathise with the unjustly blamed! Thanks for your much needed much valued presence!

Poor lad so innocent that he cannot hide his feelings. No one looked at his innocence, but everyone blamed him as if he committed some crime. Another beautiful poem Valsa. Loved it.

Entertaining write with great rhyming!

Again another good one. Well rhymed.

Every poet is is a glutton, always engaged in gobbling new thoughts and digesting it as an inspiration to create the energy of poetry.

Elders hide their inner feelings. He is a boy who displays his true feeling. Nice limerick to say it is not a crime.