Thursday, July 11, 2019

Limerick - 31 - Fall Comments

Rating: 4.8

Once Michel threw Liza a ball
It hit her torso she did call
Wow, ‘Do you mean me doll? '
He laughed at and said ‘a mall'
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Irfanulla Shariff 07 September 2019

Awesome limerick...enjoyed reading it. Nicely penned!

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M Asim Nehal 31 August 2019

Wonderful, humorous limerick. I enjoyed reading it.

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Liza Sudina 29 August 2019

Made me smile. Thanks!

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Anjandev Roy 28 August 2019

Great humour. Enjoyed it. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Rebecca Navarre 20 August 2019

Awesome humor! .. Vivid imagery! .. Ever so nice too, to see an occasional poem that brings laughter to hearts and joy into this world! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! .......................+++++

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A superb and funny limerick

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Anil Kumar Panda 09 August 2019

Hahahahahaha... so funny. Thanks for sharing.Loved it.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 August 2019

A nice humor, a beautiful Limerick by Mahakul Ji.

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Savita Tyagi 30 July 2019

Haha! Even treatment!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 July 2019

A fun limerick, sir Kumarmani..10++

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Pranab K Chakraborty 23 July 2019

Nice fall by rhyme I enjoyed. The ball is much critical to hit as a word. Thank you.

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 July 2019

beautiful limerick .....///

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Kumarmani ji, Nice to see a poem that is rhyming with humour.

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Indira Renganathan 21 July 2019

for tat...a spontaneous write....thank you Kumar

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Susan Williams 17 July 2019

Sounds like a rousing snowball fight! ! ! Fun! !

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Ravinder Soni 17 July 2019

Loved reading this piece. Great work, my brother.

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Unwritten Soul 15 July 2019

Hahahahahaha....i laughed at them i say " wow i mean both of you doll and mall" ...joking.... such a funny limerick here dear. make me smile!

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Sekharan Pookkat 13 July 2019

so funny -enjoyed it sir-we will laugh when others slips- thans for sharing

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 July 2019

Limericks are funny, and when come from unexpected quarters, are more so. Here is one. Came the ball making me fall as well.

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Prabir Gayen 12 July 2019

Beautiful Limerick..... sweetly written..///

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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