Saturday, April 27, 2019

Limerick- 30- Pen And Stain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tin and Pin were going to market
On the way they found a basket
The basket had a pen
Pin thought, " it is a gain"
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Mj Lemon 04 April 2020

Wonderful verse, Kumarmani! There is great humour and great truth here. I have an acquaintance who never sees the downside to anything he decides needs his advocacy. You have reminded me that this person is in critical need of a pen! Brilliant Limerick!

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Rajnish Manga 13 December 2019

What an interesting limerick! Full of fun and humour. Thanks, Kumarmani ji, for sharing it. Written in lighter vein, this further expands the scope of your poetic skills.

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Susan Williams 24 August 2019

Isn't that just the way it is with found objects- they end up having been thrown away for a reason. Grrr! Finders- 0, Pen- 2. I liked this limerick! ! ! !

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 10 May 2019

A fun imaginative limerick, u did a super job poet!

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Tom Allport 04 May 2019

Ha ha and the moral should always be what is lost then found may not be sound so never touch if you don't want a fuss.

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Indira Renganathan 03 May 2019

Pin could have taken the basket with the pen ...but his fate..why did he have to clip it on to his jacket...nice fun.. enjoyed this limerick 10++++

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Valsa George 01 May 2019

Thus what was thought to be a gain turned out to be an inky stain! Beautiful limerick!

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M Asim Nehal 30 April 2019

Wonderful limerick. Nicely penned.

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 April 2019

A light-hearted limerick from a heaving heart called Kumarmani Mahakul. I enjoyed it. Sometimes a pen leaks And a riot of laughter wreaks.

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Pushpendra Patel 28 April 2019

Both Tin and pin had gone to market and the have wondered us. You are a nice and funny poet. I cannot stop smiling more. Thank you for sharing this poem.

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Douglas Scotney 27 April 2019

as they say, ' you win on the roundabout and lose on the merry-go-round'.

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 April 2019

Leakage! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 27 April 2019

A beautifully crafted A pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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