Limerick- 30- Pen And Stain Comments
Tin and Pin were going to market
On the way they found a basket
The basket had a pen
Pin thought, " it is a gain"
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What an interesting limerick! Full of fun and humour. Thanks, Kumarmani ji, for sharing it. Written in lighter vein, this further expands the scope of your poetic skills.
Isn't that just the way it is with found objects- they end up having been thrown away for a reason. Grrr! Finders- 0, Pen- 2. I liked this limerick! ! ! !
Ha ha and the moral should always be what is lost then found may not be sound so never touch if you don't want a fuss.
Pin could have taken the basket with the pen ...but his fate..why did he have to clip it on to his jacket...nice fun.. enjoyed this limerick 10++++
Thus what was thought to be a gain turned out to be an inky stain! Beautiful limerick!
A light-hearted limerick from a heaving heart called Kumarmani Mahakul. I enjoyed it. Sometimes a pen leaks And a riot of laughter wreaks.
Both Tin and pin had gone to market and the have wondered us. You are a nice and funny poet. I cannot stop smiling more. Thank you for sharing this poem.
as they say, ' you win on the roundabout and lose on the merry-go-round'.
A beautifully crafted A pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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7/27/2025 11:56:44 PM # 1.0.0
Wonderful verse, Kumarmani! There is great humour and great truth here. I have an acquaintance who never sees the downside to anything he decides needs his advocacy. You have reminded me that this person is in critical need of a pen! Brilliant Limerick!