Wednesday, August 13, 2014

Limerick.3 - My Shadow Comments

Rating: 4.3

It follows me wherever I go
Believe it cause I told you so
The only time I get to see it
Is when the evening sun is lit
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Patricia Grantham
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Amitava Sur 11 September 2014

A lovely limerick, sounding very sweet and funny about finding the shadow when the evening sun is lit! ! ! Very nice.

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shadows are never lost they always show up...nice limerick..

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 02 September 2014

the shadow is dark in color and it appears when the light arrives, we have the darkness in the space and the heart, what is the object that sheds shadow to these places? ..

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 25 August 2014

Shadow follows everywhere. Shadow needs the sun. Nice poem.

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Neela Nath Das 25 August 2014

Without light there is no shadow.A fabulous poem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 August 2014

Till there is light there is shadow if no hope no interest in life wonderful write thank you Patricia God Bless You

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Kanav Justa 20 August 2014

as long as we see our shadows, , we are reminded of the light that falls over us, , , wonderful write, , ,

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Payal Parande 17 August 2014

oh that was fantastic, if was a bit sweet and a bit funny, brilliant write ma'am bravo

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Lyn Paul 13 August 2014

your shadow is something original that only you can create. It can also be fun for children. Thank you Patricia

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Khairul Ahsan 13 August 2014

A beautiful limerick. The only time one get's to see one's shadow is when the evening sun comes out... a great expression! Well done!

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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