Friday, August 21, 2015

Limerick-3-In A Spree Comments

Rating: 5.0

Three friends were in a free
They presumed to rest near a sea.
They fixed their tent on the shore,
They felt mirth instead of bore.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Edward Kofi Louis 01 July 2020

Bore, core, ore! With the muse of the shore; No store needed. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 December 2016

picture of Mfena Ortswen xInteresting lines. Nice initiative. 21 Aug 2015 by Mfena Ortswen | Reply picture of Jane Taylor Hardy xA fun write.....I can envision the three friends...clever and creative! 21 Aug 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply picture of Thomas A Robinson xThey just were having fun and got carried away. 21 Aug 2015 by Thomas A Robinson | Reply picture of Rohan ******* xVery nice sir... 21 Aug 2015 by Rohan ******* | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xHo-ho-ha-ha-ha-haaaaa....Gone are the three friends....Excellent limerick, Sir! 21 Aug 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply picture of Prashant Shaurya xA very creative write with a good dose of humour. A write true to its form! 21 Aug 2015 by Prashant Shaurya | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xA good read, , , Sir, , , 22 Aug 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply

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M Asim Nehal 03 October 2015

Awesome Limerick.....A story of three friends going tospy-turvy............

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Amitava Sur 26 August 2015

Loved this funny idea to have a tent by the sea shore. Enjoyed.

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* Sunprincess * 26 August 2015

...........very nice, and so exciting...thank you for sharing ★

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Akhtar Jawad 24 August 2015

Fun but a thoughtful one...................................10

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 24 August 2015

Woah fun humor in limerick. A tent on the beach toppled by waves n wind. Thumbs up.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 24 August 2015

Woah fun humor in limerick. A tent on the beach toppled by waves n wind.

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David Wood 22 August 2015

Nothing worse than your tent becoming flooded! Nice poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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