Friday, March 20, 2015

Limerick.29. Search Comments

Rating: 4.9

A lady was seen searching in the light
Though not stupid, she was far from bright
“What do you search? ”
“I look for my watch,
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Valsa George
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M Asim Nehal 31 January 2017

I hope she is not searching a niddle in such dim lights..

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Seema Jayaraman 28 September 2015

Thanks for sharing.. light limerick

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Bri Edwards 12 April 2015

call ME stupid! i had to read this twice to get the joke! Daniel Brick (in his comment) mentions my favorite people.........The Simpsons. i sometimes wear an old t-shirt with goofy-looking Bart (the boy) Simpson saying Don't have a cow, man! ; i usually am in bed when wearing it. ok, valsa, your stupid humour (congratulations) has won this poem a trip to MyPoemList! bri :)

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 April 2015

A beautiful search going on in a funny way. Beautiful presentation. Loved it.

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Kelly Kurt 02 April 2015

A fun limerick, Valsa. Thank you for sharing.

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Daniel Brick 30 March 2015

As Homer Simpson would say, DUH! (Do you know the Simpsons in India? They're one of America's premiere families - a grown-ups' cartoon show that has been running on TV for almost 30 years!) This a clever revelation of stupidity. It must be fun and relaxing to do a brief, funny poem after the serious ones.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 28 March 2015

Very funny indeed......Valsa........scripted with great wit.....10

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 24 March 2015

I look for my watch, In the room where it is, there’s no light” Truly, In our life we do so many such things.

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Kee Thampi 22 March 2015

I many times find my self also fool to search something somewhere...... Almost my life is spoilt, where to find my God here or there

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 20 March 2015

You seem to be in a great mood. Your limericks are getting funnier day by day.

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Rajesh Thankappan 20 March 2015

A misjudged search. Funny. The might have eyes of an owl!

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Rajesh Thankappan 20 March 2015

A misjudged search. Funny. The lady might have eyes of an owl!

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Akhtar Jawad 20 March 2015

An interesting poem...............................................

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 March 2015

There is no light in the room where the watch lies and she was not bright enough. It was simple she could not find it. Beautiful limerick. Enjoyed.

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Rajnish Manga 20 March 2015

Thanks for sharing the limerick- loaded with lots of laughter which is in short supply these days.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 March 2015

We search and look very much. Very beautiful poem shared with thought. The day which was searching for light we have definitely seen. There was no light, but night was broken out by rays of light. Nice one.10.

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