Limerick.28.Mighty Fall Comments

your limericks are always a funny read thanks Valsa

Did they flee in glee? Or did their hearts lose the thud? The limerick is good.

Though this limerick is undoubtedly very humorous, we at the same time can draw an analogy with real life situation if we just imagine ourselves in the boots of the fat man in many a life's daunting situation!

Though this limerick is undoubtedly very humorous, we at the same time can draw an analogy with real life situation if we just imagine ourselves in the boots of the fat man in many a life's daunting situation!

That thud made everyone flee! That the punch. Good limerick.

That thud made everyone flee! That the punch. Good limerick.

The Mighty Fall made me smile! Very well composed as usual, Valsa!

The Mighty Fall made me smile. Well composed as ever, Valsa!

Thanks God I am lean..............................

hahaha so hilarious! good one Mam

Alas with a new heavy thus it expresses reality of climbing up. Very beautifully presented Limerick.

Very humorous indeed made more humorous by the size of the man.

Humorous yes, but hope when he fell hope the bees had fled too.

Very humorous indeed.....Valsa.....very nicely composed.......I liked it.....10