Wednesday, July 11, 2018

Limerick - 28 - Cartman Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once upon a time you listen please
A cartman was on a cart under bees
Some bees did sting the man
He outcried soon to his fan
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Edward Kofi Louis 15 October 2019

A sting from a bee! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 July 2018

..........children did tease ///funny// titillate in mate old age lives in no banned fun jocund enlarge life

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Indira Renganathan 12 July 2018

Limericks are defined to be humorous only...yours is no exception...enjoyed- 10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 July 2018

A funny write. Very entertaining. Enjoyed reading it.10

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 July 2018

Beautiful Limerick filled with humour. Loved reading it.

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Muzahidul Reza 11 July 2018

Wonderful Limerick, great source of laughter, thanks for sharing the poem with us,10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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