Limerick.27. Shock Treatment Comments

A brilliant Limerick full of fun and humor. Ha..ha...her fist fell on his cheek ‘dum' ‘dum'! . Did he say again " Can I kiss you madam? I appreciate the way of presentation. Thank you.

A well-penned good laugh, Valsa George.

women can be so mean! had she offered him an apple? she MUST have done SOMETHING! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A man need not be crazy to want to kiss dear Valsa. Maybe she thought him lazy? Or was she holding out for salsa? ? bri :)

Enjoyed another facet of your poetry. You are at your ease, here too.

I hope the feisty fist has reformed the man for good. Nice reading.

This is excellant, Valsa! Poor Adam!

That is very sad for the poor soul just out of a madhouse. That too on Valentine's day. I wish he had been lucky. Good rhyme.

Enjoyed this naughty poem.............................

lol...poor Adam ended up in despair on Valetines day

The cheek got a 'dum' 'dum', it is pleasant sounding. Nicely composed. Enjoyed the action.

He won't ask again. Don't mess with her! Thank you

This is fantastic.....Valsa......so nicely composed with wonderful words.....10