Tuesday, November 11, 2014

Limerick.24. Caution Comments

Rating: 5.0

Guard your tongue before words you fling
Let them not fly as from a sling
Tongue is to taste
And never to bite
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Valsa George
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Anjandev Roy 26 December 2019

Brilliant Limerick, as usual. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 September 2019

An excellent Limerick dear madam! Thanks for sharing...stay always happy and blessed along with your beloved family by the bless of almighty God

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Bri Edwards 23 August 2019

i liked 1st two lines. French Kissing Yes, taste with your tongue if you can. Lick stamps and a baked bean can top. But if you're passionate & a " French" fan, your lover and you may not be able to stop.. kissing until your entwined tongues withdraw, leaving all the gawking onlookers feeling awe! ! bri :)

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Bri Edwards 23 August 2019

1 - " A limerick is a humorous poem consisting of five lines. The first, second, and fifth lines must have seven to ten syllables while rhyming and having the same verbal rhythm. The third and fourth lines should only have five to seven syllables; they too must rhyme with each other and have the same rhythm" I thought i taught you better! was this written BEFORE you were my student? bri : (

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A fan 04 October 2018

If not, cut the length of your tongue........enjoyed the humor!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 August 2018

Superb limerick. I agree with Deepak ' s wonderful comment. One of the best limericks one ever read. It brings humor and imparts wisdom 10++++and on to my Poem List.

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Akhtar Jawad 13 December 2016

A cobra frightens us so many times, the to and fro of its tongue continues, but once it bites it loses its poison, and becomes a poor earthworm.

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Mihaela Pirjol 06 December 2014

Wise thoughts, so very true. A well done limerick!

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Paul Sebastian 15 November 2014

Oh yes, the tongue, a loose member can bring life or death to a person! Good write. Enjoyed.

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Dinesan Madathil 14 November 2014

Tongue getting trimmed is a fine proposal. Anyway, this soft piece of flesh can be troublesome too. A fine limerick.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 November 2014

If caution is not followed one might bite one's own tongue. Nice advice.

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Salini Nair 12 November 2014

Tongue is to taste And never to bite....tongue problem creator sometimes...cut the length of your tongue.....nice

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 11 November 2014

This is one of the best limericks I have ever read..........Valsa........great write....10/10

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Saheb Mohapatra 11 November 2014

very nice caution...............ha ha ha........cut your tongue! ! ! ! ! ! ........................extremely funny...thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 November 2014

This is look before you leap. Or else tongue will slip. Then there will be trouble, that is why be a man of humble. Very nice description and Excellent Limerick.24. Nice job on sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 November 2014

That is look before you leap. Or else tongue will slip....that may bring trouble...be a person of humble....Very nice Limerick.24. Excellent thought expression.

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