Limerick.23. Precaution Comments
A naughty porcupine lives on a hill
He has sharp and piercing quill
Nobody pets him,
Nobody frets him,
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The subject matter chosen for this limerick has enough potential to be developed into a long poem. But brevity being the primary structural limit or beauty of a limerick this write has to be so. A fine write from you Valsa Madam.
Be aware to avoid painful situations, be good to yourself, lovely limerick!
Trouble should be avoided, precaution should be taken at first. Nice awareness poem.
One of the traits in some of the humans too....ha ha ha...lovely limerik...enjoyed :)
What a naughty porcupine! Nice caution delivered through the limerick.
Nobody pets and nobody frets for being pricked by his quill.......Valsa....phenomenal write.......beautifully put
His quill has been used to make pens for writing, I have seen this animal even in the plains. An untouched topic.
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7/19/2025 9:25:48 PM # 1.0.0
So true! Stay away from porcupine and their likes!