Tuesday, September 23, 2014

Limerick.21. An Advice Comments

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Now that you are old and spent
Look in the mirror, I recommend
Before stepping out
Lest somebody may shout
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 December 2018

Beautifully painted this Limeric with fun and humor. Nice presentation.

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Loke Kok Yee 05 November 2015

I did and I got quite a fright thanks Valsa-10

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 October 2014

Quiet funny Limerick Valsa. Beautifully presented.....

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Piyush Dey 05 October 2014

nice write, a funny read. loved to read something funny after such sorrowful reads.

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Rajkamal P.j 30 September 2014

A good write. Congrats.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 September 2014

It is easy to communicate with an XYZ - eXamine Your Zip. The limerick made me laugh. Thank you.

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Amitava Sur 23 September 2014

Ha ha ha.... so common a mistake but happens, enjoyed a lot.

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Kee Thampi 23 September 2014

born nature and pray God be gift with courage

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Lyn Paul 23 September 2014

OMG Valsa, I haven't seen this for a while.... Is it okay to tell them to zip it, Or do we look bad that we have noticed. Thank You for making us Smile.

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Akhtar Jawad 23 September 2014

This too happened with me, but it was the zip and again my wife pointed out it.Another interesting write. But how you come to know my secrets?

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Dinesan Madathil 23 September 2014

An advice to men alone! Why are the old eves spared?

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Gajanan Mishra 23 September 2014

look in the mirror, wonderful and also meaningful.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 23 September 2014

The blues of old age and this is the truth we see of age around......Valsa.....very funny indeed.....very creative

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Mantu Mahakul 23 September 2014

Beautifully penned the poem of awareness. Nice one.

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